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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 02:00, 2 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]


Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:00, 2 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

  • Lead and infobox;
    • She also laid minefields; could this be merged with the previous sentence, because laying minefields is a general task, there is no need to mention it as a separate sentence Done
  • Section 1;
    • Stabilimento Tecnico Triestino; I think this is not an English name, if so, put on the italics Done
  • Section 2;
    • Inconsistency in figures of full load displacement Done
      • 320 tonnes (310 long tons); prose
      • 320 t (315 long tons); infobox
    • In the previous section, it is said that the requirement was "sustaining 30 knots (56 km/h) for 10 hours", here it is "980 nautical miles (1,810 km; 1,130 mi) at 16 knots (30 km/h; 18 mph)", so this satisfy the requirement. Mention it clearly.
      • I don't think it follows that the stated performance necessarily met the criteria.
  • Section 3;
    • were involved in the shelling of various Italian shore-based targets known as the Bombardment of Ancona; to a general reader it creates a confusion whether the "shelling" is known as "Bombardment of Ancona" or the "shore-based targets", make it clearer Done
  • 7.4% confidence, violation unlikely
Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 09:18, 12 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]
Thanks for the review, Krishna! Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 01:05, 13 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
  1. It is reasonably well written.
    a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
  2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.
    a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
  3. It is broad in its coverage.
    a (major aspects): b (focused):
  4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.
    Fair representation without bias:
  5. It is stable.
    No edit wars, etc.:
  6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
    a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
  7. Overall:
    Pass/Fail:
    Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 02:33, 17 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]