Talk:Yugoslav minelayer Zmaj/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:13, 7 July 2010 (UTC) Overall this article is good, though I have the following concerns:[reply]

The lead feels a bit meh to me. Can't explain it all that well, but it doesn't feel like there's much to it. Should probably be expanded a bit if nothing else, the article's short but not that short.
- Added a little bit.
Just about every paragraph starts with Zmaj/Drache. Mix it up a bit.
- Mixed up.
"Due to the restrictions of the Versailles Treaty she had to be built as an unarmed auxiliary." comma after treaty. There are a couple extra places where some commas may be needed.
- Didn't see anything else that needed a comma, but your eyes are fresher than mine.--Sturmvogel 66 (talk) 05:14, 7 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Just a couple things, mainly nitpicks. I'll put it on hold and pass when completed. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 04:13, 7 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Looks good now, so I'll pass the article. Wizardman _{Operation Big Bear} 15:27, 7 July 2010 (UTC)[reply]