Talk:Yo Nací Para Amarte/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 02:05, 21 February 2017 (UTC)[reply]

Initial comments:

The single cover image should have an "alt" parameter
Just a suggestion: "and was released as the fourth single" --> "and was released as the fourth and final single"
"which he admits goes beyond reason." --> I'm afraid this does not sound very encyclopedic to me; could this be simplified?
No music video? What a shame :(
If "goes beyond reason" is a better description and more correct (obviously you're the expert in this situation), then I would suggest keeping it in quotes up in the lead and ignore my previous suggestion
Also just a suggestion: "fourth single" --> "fourth and final single"
"It reached on top of the chart" --> "It reached the top of the chart"
"the song" --> "The song"
"launching" --> "launch"
Reference #1 – Link Billboard please
Reference #6 – Link Sony Music Mexico please
Reference #11 – Unlike Billboard please

ON HOLD – Ping me when you are done. Thank you, Carbrera (talk) 06:15, 9 March 2017 (UTC).[reply]

@Carbrera: I finished the article. I took your second suggestion and added the quotation on the lead since it is a reviewer saying that. I also linked SME instead Sony Mexico because of an oversight on my part. And yes, it's a shame that there's no music video for the song. Erick (talk) 15:46, 9 March 2017 (UTC)[reply]