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Reviewer: Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk · contribs) 15:09, 25 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]

  • Only a few comments:
    • Make sure you order the long citations correctly.
    • Link Li Jiancheng at first mention
    • Many duplicate links
    • It is unecessary to put citations like this: "The sun is red.[1] The sun is hot.[1]"
    • It is unecessary to put citations in the lead
    • Add identifiers for the first two refs.

--Tomandjerry211 (alt) (talk) 15:09, 25 August 2015 (UTC)[reply]