Talk:Xiaxue/GA4

Note: User:Hildanknight has sadly withdrawn his nomination. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 10:01, 6 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

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Reviewer: Bonkers The Clown (talk · contribs) 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

I'd be happy to review this! More to come. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯

Out of date... I suggest you try to find more pictures to enhance this page. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 09:05, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Needs to be expanded a bit to comply with WP:LEAD. Except for a birth date and name, I don't see the slightest mention of her birth in the lede. Possibly could add lines like "Born in Singapore, blah blah blah"... ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
No need to link "Singaporean" per WP:MOS. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Either stick to a serial comma or don't. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Infobox? ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:26, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Blogs. Other media, controversy, etc., could be lumped up into one "Career" section with subsequent sub-sections. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Content-wise, there's much more to work on. See also. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 09:05, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]

If it's a dead link, please tag it as one. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:22, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
I just don't understand why you don't like giving online links. C'mon, it's the 21st century! If you found them on Factiva, add the Factiva link! Really, you should start using more online sources. We are not talking about 13th century witches here. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:57, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]
Further verification: Page numbers to newspaper sections. ☯ Bonkers The Clown \(^_^)/ Nonsensical Babble ☯ 08:57, 3 April 2013 (UTC)[reply]