Talk:X-Cops/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Glimmer721 (talk · contribs) 02:08, 2 March 2012 (UTC)

Will review soon. Glimmer721 ^talk 02:08, 2 March 2012 (UTC)

Comments:

• Link Nielsen Ratings in lead

Done

• "Due to the uniqueness of the episode received positive reviews, with critics praising its humor." Sentence lacks a subject ("of the episode" is a prepositional phrase). I would change it to, "Do to its uniqueness, the episode received positive reviews, with critics praising its humor."

Done

• "Unlike nearly all other episodes of The X-Files, "X-Cops" is also a fictional crossover with COPS." Nearly all episodes? Isn't it the only one? I would just say, "As such, "X-Cops" is a fictional crossover with COPS". However, you may want to mention that it's the only one shot in real-time other than "Triangle"

Done

• Explain who Skinner is (i.e. "their boss")

Done

• Unlike "sunrise" and "dawn"

Done

• "...because they didn't exhibit..." didn't → did not

Done

• Link green-light

Done

• "crack house" should be linked in the plot, and not in "Casting"

Done

• You like "one of the few" to "Triangle"--is this the only other one? If so, just say that.

Done

• "Inspired by the actually show"...actually? Is that a typo, or does it mean something else?

Done

• "On one night, three-and-a-half pages of script were shot in only two hours.[6] The norm for the X-Files is about three to four pages a day." Maybe combine: "One one night, three-and-a-half pages of the script were shot in only two hours, while the normal rate for The X-Files had been three to four pages a day".

Done

• Refs 12, 13, and 14 need publishing dates (they're there)

Done

Placing on hold for 7 days while issues are addressed. Glimmer721 ^talk 03:01, 2 March 2012 (UTC)

OK, I believe I've addressed all the issues.--Gen. Quon (talk) 03:25, 2 March 2012 (UTC)