Talk:Woodleigh MRT station/GA1
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Reviewer: Sammi Brie (talk · contribs) 04:06, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
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[edit]Woodleigh was not planned to open along with the other NEL stations. The station would only
— Consider joining with semicolon- In "Station details", the second paragraph has some choppy short sentences that could use some reflow to sound better.
- "The experts in Edinburgh" — since these experts are new to the reader, I wouldn't use a definite article. "Experts in Edinburgh..." This could also perhaps be joined by semicolon with the preceding sentence.
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[edit]- Refs are archived.
- Images have alt tags and are suitably licensed. The image in the History section probably should be left-aligned; I know this isn't always the best option, but I'd rather have some balance in the layout than what's lopsided.
- Earwig reveals only quotes and common phrases in similarity.
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[edit]- Just a bit of prose fine-tuning and moving that one image over and you have a GA, ZKang123. Ping me when changes have been made. Sammi Brie (she/her • t • c) 04:20, 20 January 2022 (UTC)
- Addressed above issues. @Sammi Brie ZKang123 (talk) 09:49, 20 January 2022 (UTC)