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Wisconsin dairy industry has been listed as one of the Agriculture, food and drink good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.

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Date	Process	Result
April 2, 2021	Good article nominee	Listed
November 10, 2021	Peer review	Reviewed

A fact from this article appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the "Did you know?" column on December 27, 2020.

The text of the entry was: Did you know ... that Wisconsin was the leading producer of dairy products in the United States from 1915 to 1993?

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Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by Cwmhiraeth (talk) 07:06, 19 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

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... that Wisconsin was the leading producer of dairy products in the United States from 1915 until 1993? [1] [2]
- ALT1:... that Wisconsin's 7000 dairy farms produce 2.44 billion pounds of milk per month? [3]
- ALT2:... that Wisconsin is known as "America's Dairyland" due to dairy being a major industry in that state? [4]

Created by JackFromReedsburg (talk). Self-nominated at 04:44, 8 December 2020 (UTC).[reply]

ALT3:... that Wisconsin's dairy industry produces 2.44 billion pounds of milk a month from over 7000 farms? Footlessmouse (talk) 02:01, 9 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

General: Article is new enough and long enough
New enough: Long enough:

Policy: Article is sourced, neutral, and free of copyright problems
Adequate sourcing: Neutral: Free of copyright violations, plagiarism, and close paraphrasing:

Hook: Hook has been verified by provided inline citation
Cited: Interesting:

QPQ: None required.

Overall: WP:DYKcheck says the article is 2133 characters, which seems just about long enough. Earwig [5] report is clean. Either the main hook or ALT3 look fine to me. Joofjoof (talk) 03:41, 10 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

Note: hooks 0–2 had bold links as: Wisconsin. To avoid MOS:EGG, I included more in the links, without changing any text in the hooks. MANdARAX • XAЯAbИAM 07:50, 10 December 2020 (UTC)[reply]

America’s Dairyland: The Next Generation

Some truly good reporting on the future of dairy in Wisconsin which would be great for further work on this article. Best, Thriley (talk) 22:43, 5 February 2021 (UTC) ^[1]^[2][reply]

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GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Wisconsin dairy industry/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Some Dude From North Carolina (talk · contribs) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Hey, I'm going to be reviewing this article. Expect comments by the end of the week. Some Dude From North Carolina (talk) 17:51, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Basic stuff and comments

Images are free to use.
"ageing" → "aging" (American English)
"later half" → "latter half" (both uses)
Remove the comma after "the farms".
Remove the comma after "the railroad" (unnecessary).
Remove the comma after "switched to dairy farming" (near the end of sentence).
"to higher" → "to a higher"
"products has" → "products have"
Remove the comma after "2000".
"Wisconsin have" → "Wisconsin has"
Archive sources (either manually or with this tool).
Also, don't try to have website links (ex. "www." and ".org") present in the "|website=" parameter (find the actual name of the source instead).

@Some Dude From North Carolina:, I fixed what you recommended. JackFromReedsburg (talk | contribs) 20:21, 31 March 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Progress

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)
It is reasonably well written. a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): It is factually accurate and verifiable. a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism): It is broad in its coverage. a (major aspects): b (focused): It follows the neutral point of view policy. Fair representation without bias: It is stable. No edit wars, etc.: It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate. a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass/Fail:
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Newspaper sources

A list of newspaper sources that could be added to the article:

--JackFromWisconsin (talk | contribs) 13:44, 18 May 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Documentary

America's Dairyland at the Crossroads (Milwaukee PBS) Maybe useful? The Milwaukee Journal Sentinel did a write-up but they also helped produce it so that's probably not a pure secondary source. Mapsax (talk) 00:08, 19 November 2021 (UTC)[reply]

[1] ttps://www.pbs.org/wgbh/frontline/article/rural-wisconsin-struggle-to-save-family-farms/?utm_campaign=frontline&utm_content=1611711002&utm_medium=social&utm_source=facebook

[2] ttps://www.pbs.org/wgbh/frontline/article/americas-dairyland-the-next-generation/

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