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This entry was about Wilfred Emory Curshaw a officer in the confederate army during the civil war. The interest in this figure comes from the shared hometown of Richmond, Virginia. Curtshaw lost a leg during one of the last battles of the civil war. This figure is not currently in wikipedia and the author would like to add it. limited information on this guy.

1) I like how you categorize each section it has simple headlines. You might want to add a little bit to the background information on his personal life and why he decided to be involved in the civil war.

2) someone said this to me during the peer review, but you could tag names like Civil war and General E. Lee. also, did Curshaw have any medals or participate in any big named battles?

3) maybe work on just cleaning up the way phrases are worded when describing his promotions.

4) Also maybe include a picture of the guy?