Talk:Wide Awake in Europe/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 19:05, 24 July 2013 (UTC)
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- "A limited number of EPs were produced" it would be better if we knew how many, as quite obviously it would have been impossible to produce an unlimited number.
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- "Among the three tracks is "Mercy""... I imagine for a couple of extra words, you could add the names of the other two tracks!
Done EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- You have USEng (organizers) but BritEng dates (26 November 2010). Be consistent.
Done Changed to USEng dates. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- "on 26 November 2010 (Black Friday)" I don't think you need to reiterate Black Friday yet again.
Done Removed this part. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- " Because only 5000 copies were created, the availability to record stores was limited" again, it seems like stating the obvious here, but I know what you're trying to say.... can we re-phrase a bit?
Done Removed this part. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Don't think you need to link roulette.
Done Removed. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
- Any reason why Dublin and Brussels are linked and Paris isn't?
Done Linked paris. EditorEat ma talk page up, scotty!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 21:21, 25 July 2013 (UTC)
A few minor issues, I'll put it on hold for a week. The Rambling Man (talk) 17:03, 25 July 2013 (UTC)