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Reviewer: Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Lead

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 Done

Composition

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  • Link R&B ballad.
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  • Questioning Pandora reliability, see on your talk.
Removed Pandora reference.  Done

Reception

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"Sailed" isn't very common so put it in quotation marks

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  • TIME is a magazine so say of TIME not of the TIME
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  • To avoid using those brackets, say "...of TIME say Houston "particularly held her own," with a "masterly balance of pop zip and soulful melancholy."
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  • Put Shoop Shopp in quotations as it is a song.
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Music video

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Everything else unnoted sounds good ! Candyo32 - Merry CHRISTmas :) 19:43, 27 December 2010 (UTC)[reply]