Talk:When Love Was Blind (1911 film)/GA1
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Reviewer: Jaguar (talk · contribs) 17:34, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
Sorry for the delay in reviewing these, I'll start this when I get some free time tomorrow JAGUAR 17:34, 26 August 2015 (UTC)
Initial comments
[edit]- "May's ignores this warning" - May ignores
- "A surviving film still shows the "disfigured husband", giving the possibility of identifying the actor who played Frank Larson" - any idea on the actor who played Frank?
- "The single reel film, approximately 960 feet long" - always worth converting this to metres
- I think the lead could be split into two paragraphs, as per WP:LEAD and most organisational procedures
- The Moving Picture World's review could be paraphrased a little, but this should be OK considering the review is over 100 years old
References
[edit]Close - promoted
[edit]It's a short and compact article, so there weren't a lot of issues to bring up. I couldn't find anything that goes against the GA criteria, so I'll be passing this one. Also done a bit of copyediting. 
JAGUAR 18:17, 26 August 2015 (UTC)