Talk:What Have You Done for Me Lately/GA2
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Reviewer: SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 02:40, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
Overview
[edit]Prose: See below Resolved
Sourcing: See below Resolved
Coverage: See below Resolved
Neutrality: No issues
Stability: No issues
GA Result: On hold for seven days Passed
Details
[edit]- Composition
"and calls him a 'loser'"..... add "she" before "calls" and add "in response" after "loser"
- Critical reception
Any more reviews available?
- Unfortunately I conldn't find any more reviews.
- If you do, by all means add SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 03:38, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
- Music video
It would be nice to add more detail to this section. For example, have a paragraph describing the video's production, one describing the plot, and another containing critics' reviews.
- Usage in media and legacy
"Mike Staver in the book titled Leadership Isn't For Cowards: How to Drive Performance by Challenging People wrote that" → "Mike Staver wrote in Leadership Isn't For Cowards: How to Drive Performance by Challenging People"
- References
- Use "authorlink" parameter to link Jon Pareles in ref#11 (The New York Times)
- Publisher for Chicago Tribune (ref#51) is Tony W. Hunter, use "authorlink" parameter to link Greg Kot in this ref
- Unlink "Philly.com" in ref#52, and publisher is Philadelphia Media Network
- "NewsOK" should read The Oklahoman in ref#57, and publisher is Chris Reen
- E! should not be italicized in ref#58
- Try to find a better source than Toronto Sun (ref#62)
- All
Done. Alex talk page! 15:29, 15 July 2014 (UTC)
- Almost, try to add more critic reviews for the music video. After that, we're good to go. SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 03:38, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
- Finding critic reviews for both the song and video proved to be difficult. Sorry. Alex talk page! 07:00, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
- If you ever do find more, by all means add. In any case, good work- I'm now passing. SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 15:21, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
- Finding critic reviews for both the song and video proved to be difficult. Sorry. Alex talk page! 07:00, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
- Almost, try to add more critic reviews for the music video. After that, we're good to go. SNUGGUMS (talk · contribs) 03:38, 16 July 2014 (UTC)
