Talk:West Hendford Cricket Ground/GA1
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Reviewer: Relentlessly (talk · contribs) 07:11, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
This is nearly there, but there are a few things to clear up.
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists): 
- A few bits of prose read oddly, mainly in the first paragraph of "History".
"Yeovil and County Cricket Club were formed" – here I believe you need the singular, as you're referring to a single entity, not a collection of individuals. The same later in the same sentence.
"the club was reformed with the lesser remit" – you mean "re-formed", I think
You use "the club" several times starting after "The club played at West Hendford" but you are referring to two different clubs. This is quite confusing.
Pet peeve: "from 17–19 August" really ought to be "from 17 to 19 August".
Final paragraph of "History": "The final first-class match was played on the ground" should be "The final first-class match on the ground was played".
- A few bits of prose read oddly, mainly in the first paragraph of "History".
- a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar):
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- Reference 26 is broken
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- You're understandably a little uncertain about the non-free use rationale, but I think it's valid.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
On hold for 7 days to address the above issues. Relentlessly (talk) 07:11, 30 March 2015 (UTC)- Thanks for the review Relentlessly. I've had a run through the article, and I think your comments have all been addressed. Harrias talk 11:20, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
- Modifications look good. Pass. Relentlessly (talk) 13:16, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
- Thanks for the review Relentlessly. I've had a run through the article, and I think your comments have all been addressed. Harrias talk 11:20, 30 March 2015 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail:
