Talk:Warrior Women with Lupita Nyong'o

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Submission review & advice

@Erik, do you have time look at my first article attempt?

Dux96 (talk) 20:33, 17 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@331dot would appreciate your thoughts, too Dux96 (talk) 20:35, 17 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Dux96, looks like a good start, especially with substance! I would suggest the following:

Add an infobox
Expand the lead section to be more of a summary of the article body, per WP:LEAD
Write section headings in lowercase after the first word, e.g., "Critical response" and not "Critical Response"
Drop IMDb user ratings, and I don't think it's worth mentioning the lack of Rotten Tomatoes score either. Just dive straight into the reviews
For "In the media" section, I'm wary of quoting people involved with any film on their feelings about it. The emphasis should be on what independent sources thought of it.
The quote at the end of the "Summary" section is a bit lengthy and not "brief" as needed per MOS:QUOTE. I would summarize and paraphrase.

Hope that helps. Erik (talk | contrib) ^{(ping me)} 12:49, 18 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]

@Erik good advice and thanks. Done, see revisions Dux96 (talk) 16:34, 18 September 2022 (UTC)[reply]