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GA Review

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This review is transcluded from Talk:War of the Antiochene Succession/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]


Will review. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:58, 28 June 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Lead
  • For an article of this length the lead should at most have two paras.
Article
  • Fairly well-written, so here are a few nitpicks.
  • Maybe wikilink "suzerainty" (Background) and "emir" (First phase)
  • Duplink: Stephanie of Armenia (Aftermath)
  • Rest is flawless to my eyes. Excellently arranged and broad in coverage, bravo!
Thanks, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:32, 1 July 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Peer review

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I've listed this article (about a prolonged war in the Near East during the period of the crusades) for peer review because its neutrality and comprehensiveness are still to be checked. Thank you for your time.

Thanks, Borsoka (talk) 09:17, 3 November 2024 (UTC)[reply]