Talk:Walter Wu/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: NickGibson3900 (talk · contribs) 06:00, 10 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Will do soon -NickGibson3900 ^Talk 06:00, 10 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@TheQ Editor: See below. Also please respond at the Brian Hill review as comments have been their for a couple of days now — NickGibson3900 ^Talk 02:41, 23 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@NickGibson3900: Thanks for reviewing this, but just to let you know that you forgot to put this "=onhold". The ping would work with me too. Just remember that echo (ping) would only trigger if you sign your post. In this case, you signed it, but put wrong username. Then you fixed it, that doesn't work. Give me minute to fix these. (same thing with Brian Hill) Thanks!

Comments

"176 centimetres (5.77 ft)" - ^{[citation needed]}
- Done
"86 kilograms (190 lb)" - ^{[citation needed]}
- Done
Link Athens Paralympic Games to 2004 Paralympic Games in lead
- Done
"and BC Disabled Athlete of the Year." - Link BC to British Columbia
- I can't. "BC Disabled Athlete of the Year" is the name of the award, so either I can link it like BC Disabled Athlete of the Year or do nothing.
He has spent time as a public speaker since retirement from active sports competition. - ^{[not verified in body]}
- Done Is that better now?
FN2 needs author, day published and publisher (Maclean's)
- Done
FN5 is dead
- Done

Round two

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, no copyvios, spelling and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Numbers less than ten should be written out (e.g. four not 4)
Iink Canadian to Canada in lead
link backstroke at first mention
link freestyle at first mention
same with butterfly
link individual medley to Medley swimming

Done@NickGibson3900: The "100 metre freestyle" are supposed to link to Swimming at the 1996 Paralympics - Men's 100 metre freestyle. That page doesn't exsist yet so I linked them all to Swimming at the 1996 Paralympics. Is that okay? ΤheQ Editor ^Talk? 20:26, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@TheQ Editor: What I mean is say something like: "Wu competed in the 100 metre freestyle" (i.e link the stroke) - NickGibson3900 ^Talk 21:56, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Done @NickGibson3900: How is it now? ΤheQ Editor ^Talk? 22:02, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@TheQ Editor:, I don't mean the info box they were fine (revert those changes), I mean in the prose. Once that is fixed I'll pass it. - NickGibson3900 ^Talk 22:09, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

{[ping|NickGibson3900}} Thanks for your patience with me. I linked them the first time seen in the article. Is it okay now? Thanks, ΤheQ Editor ^Talk? 22:20, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

Sorry to be a pain TheQ Editor, but you still need to change numbers 1-9 to words. The number 3 is still in the article. - NickGibson3900 ^Talk 22:53, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]

@NickGibson3900: replaced both instances of 3 with three. ΤheQ Editor ^Talk? 23:51, 30 October 2014 (UTC)[reply]