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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Got a few GANs on hold but that is only because users haven't finished their responses yet, so I'll review this. --K. Peake 06:12, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
  • "It is a pop-rap track. The song's lyrics" → "A pop-rap track, its lyrics"
 Done
  • "finally accepting KSI's success." → "finally accepting his success."
 Done
  • "and it reached" → "and it further reached"
 Done
  • "Netherlands and New Zealand." → "the Netherlands and New Zealand."
 Done
  • Remove wikilink on costume
 Done

Background

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  • Why isn't this or a similar section at the start of the article's body?
 Done

Music and lyrics

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  • Verse–chorus form and the length are both unsourced
  • There is information from 4 and 16 about the music and vocals that can easily be added here; take the chorus, synths and bass for example
 Done
  • "KSI continued," → "He continued,"
 Done

Release and promotion

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  • "revealing the song's title as" → "revealing the title as"
 Done
 Not done you should implement the above version, not an altered one --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "debut studio album, Dissimulation (2020)." → "debut studio album Dissimulation (2020)."
 Done
 Partly done remove the comma --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
 Done
 Done
  • The replacement and verses info is not sourced; only the release and features are
 Done

Critical reception

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  • Remove target on synth
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  • Remove target on bass
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  • Remove target on instrumentation
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  • "Dominiq remarked that" → "He remarked that"
 Done
  • "this current generation."" → "this current generation"." per MOS:QUOTE
 Done

Music video

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 Done
  • "by Nayip Ramos.[19] The music video was" → "by Nayip Ramos and was" since the two sentences are too short to be separate, plus [19] should solely be at the end of the sentence
 Done
  • "The music video was released" → "The video was released"
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 Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "The video stars both artists and" → "The video stars KSI and Trippie Redd alongside"
 Done
  • Where is the dance troupe mentioned?
  •  Not done it is still there but unsourced
  • Remove wikilink on costumes
 Done
  • Remove target on behind-the-scenes footage
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 Not done --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • "Speaking about the costumes" → "Discussing the costumes"
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  • ""[It was] one" → ""[It was o]ne"
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Commercial performance

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  • "was the country's second-most" → "was the second-most"
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  • The number of weeks it spent on the second chart is not mentioned, so just change to writing about the number seven debut
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  • The Hungary and Netherlands positions are top 30, so should be mentioned in the prose
 Done
  • "In Australia, the song" → "Elsewhere, in Australia, the song" since that is a different continent
 Done
  • Is Billboard really needed in the title of the Canadian chart just because the magazine publishes it?
 Done

Live performance

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  • Move the live performance to Release and promotion, as this is only one para
 Done

Credits and personnel

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  • Songwriter should come before vocals in the credits order
 Done

Charts

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  • Are you sure the Australia Hip Hop/R&B chart is notable?
 Done

Release history

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  • Good

See also

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  • Good

References

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  • Copyvio score is too high for the Tone Deaf ref; cut down the level of quoting to fix this
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  • Make sure all of these are archived by using the tool
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  • Cite Vice as work/website instead for ref 5
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  • Cite GRM Daily as publisher instead for refs 10, 15 and 18, plus only keep the wikilink for 10
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 Partly done it has not been changed to publisher --K. Peake 19:06, 11 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Cite TikTok as publisher instead for ref 13 and remove it from the title
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  • Remove or replace refs 22 and 40 per WP:RSP
  • Cite auspOp as publisher instead for ref 36
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  • Good

Final comments and verdict

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  •  On hold until all of the issues are fixed, but a problem I noticed that is common with your articles is that you did not expand the music and lyrics even when the sources have sufficient info to do so. --K. Peake 09:21, 8 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
  • Timwikisidemen Thank you for removing the bad source; you had left some info there that was not backed up by the other refs but I deleted that since it was merely one sentence and an adjective. ✓ Pass now, took a little longer than usual but to your avail evidently! --K. Peake 18:49, 14 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]
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