Talk:Wait & See (Risk)/GA2
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 03:22, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- Please add an alt to the single cover image
- You can remove the caption altogether
- The release date for the next single "For You" is in 2000, not 1999
- Shoutout! The song was recorded in one of the towns I used to live in :) :)
Lead
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[edit]- I don't know if the "translated to Wait & See ~Risk~" is necessary since the name of the article is "Wait & See (Risk)", which is already translated, so you can remove it
Paragraph 2
[edit]- "both on" flip to "on both" please
- Add the years to the tours you mentioned in the final statement
Background and composition
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[edit]- Add 2001 in parentheses to Distance in the second to final sentence in this paragraph
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[edit]- "track's" --> "tracks"
- Change to "... on her 2007 singles "Kiss & Cry"/"Beautiful World".[5]"; then remember to link both songs individually since they each have their own respective articles
- Reword the last sentence to this please: "When a staff editor from CD Journal reviewed Utada's first greatest hits album, Utada Hikaru Single Collection Vol. 1 (2004), he labeled the composition as "urban" and "speedy".[9]"
- Again, add the year (2004) to Utada Hikaru Single Collection Vol. 1 please
Critical reception
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[edit]- You already linked and described Utada Hikaru Single Collection Vol. 1 so unlink it and remove "Utada's first greatest hits compilation" from the sentence
- I might move the CD Journal review towards the end of this paragraph since its initial review sounds a bit more "mixed" to me
- What does the Yahoo! reviewer mean when he says the single was "comfortable"? Can you elaborate?
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Remove "associate professor of biological sciences and" from from the lead statement please
- Rest looks good
Commercial response
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[edit]- Remove either "opening" or "first" from the third single as they potentially mean the same exact thing
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[edit]- The 'b' in 'b-side' should be capitalized
- After that, nothing else to add
Music video
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[edit]- "Intercut" is one word
- No sources for the description of the video so far
Paragraph 2
[edit]- Put "behind the scenes" in quotation marks like I just did please
Live performances and promotion
[edit]- Add "a" before "Utada's concert tours."
- Capitalize the 't' in 'Bohemian Summer tour' please
Track listings and formats
[edit]- De-capitalize the 's' in "DVD Single" please
- Rest is great
Credits and personnel
[edit]- You can add where the song was recorded here
Chart and certifications
[edit]Weekly charts
[edit]- Same comments as in previous reviews: Put the "yearly" chart in a separate "year-end" column please
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[edit]Really, really good article actually! On hold for seven days, wisely-worded @CaliforniaDreamsFan! Good luck!! Carbrera (talk) 04:33, 4 June 2016 (UTC)
- @Carbrera: All done
CaliforniaDreamsFan (talk · contribs} 23:49, 5 June 2016 (UTC)
- @CaliforniaDreamsFan: Thanks! I just so happened to be checking on the status of this article :) Carbrera (talk) 23:51, 5 June 2016 (UTC)