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Reviewer: Wizardman (talk • contribs • count) 13:52, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
I'll review this article shortly. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 13:52, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
Here are my issues:
- Photometry links to a dab page.
- "led to the identification of WASP-13 as host to a potential transit event." a little confused as to what 'transit event' means in this context. Might just be my ignorance, but if it could be simplified that would help.
On hold, will pass once fixed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 17:46, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
- Thanks for reviewing this article. I've fixed the dab issue, and hopefully I've clarified the "transit event" to specify a transiting object (which should hopefully be clear enough. If not, let me know). Looks like this one's all set. :) --Starstriker7(Talk) 23:03, 13 September 2011 (UTC)
- Looks good, article's passed. Wizardman Operation Big Bear 00:42, 14 September 2011 (UTC)