Talk:Vivian Hultman/GA1

GA Review

Passed. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:22, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 03:01, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 12:51, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

Revised two cats.
Added some cats.
I feel like the lead should say "Michigan Agricultural College" instead of Michigan State. You could add "now known as Michigan State University" also if you want.
"After graduating from Union High School in Grand Rapids, Michigan" unlink Grand Rapids. It is linked earlier in the lead.
"He helped the team compile" change the team to the Aggies here.
Remove refs from lead
Revise the caption to say it's from college.

I think that's everything. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 12:51, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

@WikiOriginal-9: Fixed the caption and the Aggies wording in the body. I also decided to re-do the lead, which looked a bit awkward to me. Does that look alright? BeanieFan11 (talk) 19:10, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]
Everything looks good now. Passing the article. Nice work! ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 19:21, 28 August 2024 (UTC)[reply]

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.