Talk:Villano III/GA1

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Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 10:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

"was a Mexican professional wrestler best known for performing under the stage name" - who performed under the stage name; try to avoid the phrase "best known"
"For years Arturo Díaz was one of the featured performers for the Universal Wrestling Association and during a career that spanned from 1970 until 2015 he worked for all major Mexican wrestling promotions such as Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre and AAA as well as numerous notable smaller Mexican promotions like International Wrestling Revolution Group." - During his 35 year career, Arturo Díaz was one of the featured performers for the Universal Wrestling Association, and for all the all major Mexican wrestling promotions such as Consejo Mundial de Lucha Libre and AAA as well as numerous notable smaller Mexican promotions like International Wrestling Revolution Group.
"In contrast one of his last matches ever, at Triplemanía XXIII was voted the "worst match of the year" in 2015" - a period is needed at the end of this sentence

"his father, Ray Mendoza, who would become a successful luchador when Arturo was very young." - became
"for the first match he was billed as "Ray Rosas" - missing the capital letter for the start of this sentence
"and worked without a mask" - a period is needed here as it is the end of the same sentence as above

"and pushed as one of the top stars, in no small part thanks to his father, but also because Villano III was the most talented of the Villanos." - was pushed as one of its top stars, due to his father's infulence and Vilano being the Vilanos' most talented wrestler.
The second paragraph could be separated into two for better readability, most preferably when Vilano won his second WWF Light Heavyweight Title.
"who would go on to main event a series of sold out UWA shows." - who would go on to compete in a series of sold out UWA shows.
"often teaming with Villano I.." - remove the second period
"Over the following years Villano III traded the WWF Light Heavyweight Championship back and forth with Perro Aguayo, Rambo, and Sangre Chicana" - Over the following years, Villano III traded the WWF Light Heavyweight Championship with Perro Aguayo, Rambo, and Sangre Chicana.

"The brothers soon signed with Antonio Peña's AAA and began working for AAA" - promotion
"a championship created by Peña specifically for Los Villanos as AAA did not have an active trios championship before." - title
"Los Villanos vacated both the Americas Trios title and the Mexican Atómicos title." - championship

Wrestling Observer should be italized since it is a print publication
"SuperLuchas Magazine" - Super Luchas should have the accute accent of the U, be two work and be wikilinked

"Villano III's CMLL World Light Heavyweight Championship reign came to an end on September 7, 2001," - ended
"Around 2010, Díaz's wrestling appearances slowed down" - reduced
"Arturo Díaz announced that he would retire from active competition due to several knee injuries and diminishing eyesight leaving him unable to compete as he used to in the past." - competitively
"While Los Villanos won the match the age of the Villanos and deteriorating health of Villano III and V led to the match being filled with mistakes and so poorly received that it was voted the " worst match of 2015 by the readers of the Wresting Observer." - While Los Villanos won the match, the Villano's age and Villano III and V's deteriorating health led to many mistakes leading to match being heavily criticized, and it was voted the "worst match of 2015" by Wrestling Observer readers.

"wanted to spare them the physical suffering he experienced himself." - wanted to spare them his own physical suffering.
"Once he realized that his two oldest sons had begun wrestling under masks he agreed to train them and help their wrestling careers." - , he agreed to train them and aid in their careers.
"He was also instrumental in training the rest of his son," - sons
"two sos who wrestle under the names" - same problem as above

"In the 1970s and 80s" - and the 1980s,
"Hi in ring speed helped make his La magistral cradle so effective as he was able to apply it to an opponent in a split second." - His in-ring speed helped make his La magistral cradle so effective, he was able to apply it to an opponent instantly.
"into locking in his " Media Cerrajera" submission" - locking his Media Carrajera submission
"The Wrestling Observer stated that he had 58 successful" - italicize Wrestling Observer
"Over the years Los Villanos have have changed up their color schemes" - Over the years, Los Villanos have changed their color schemes,

The Arena Naucalpan championships and the Mexican independent circuit title need to be sourced

On hold until all of the above issues have been addressed. MWright96 (talk) 20:05, 4 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]

MWright96 - thank you for the very detailed feedback, very helpful. I believe I have addressed all the issues raised. MPJ-DK (talk) 00:46, 5 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]
- @MPJ-DK: I've had to make some changes you've missed, but other than that, I can now promote to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 10:07, 5 January 2019 (UTC)[reply]