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Hi everyone! This is my first article, so please bear with me. I'm trying very hard to make it as good as it can be, I've edited it countless times now. English is not my main language either, so its even harder for me. What can I do to make it better? I'm having trouble to write it in an encyclopedic tone, I guess. I've asked a few people and they said that they saw articles that are of much poorer quality without any 'issues' listed on top of the page, so I guess mine isn't that bad. Anyways, my only wish is that it isn't deleted, and that more people add to it. Thanks for your help!

No mention of the earlier female vocalists

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In the History section of the article it says "Urbangarde was created by lyricist, poet and man of the theatre Matsunaga Temma after meeting Hamasaki Yoko, who then sang old French songs" but there were three frontwomen in the group prior to Yoko joining (URBANGARDE's first EP features Jun Ayukawa) and some of the concepts included in their music are present in the first EP. Perhaps URBANGARDE do not consider their earlier EP to be "canon" and because of that they don't mention it at all in their official discography. Dj psycho squirrel (talk) 23:59, 1 December 2024 (UTC)[reply]