Talk:Up in the Air (song)/GA2
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Reviewer: Carbrera (talk · contribs) 20:17, 2 June 2016 (UTC)
Infobox
[edit]- The single cover image needs an alt description; please add one
Lead
[edit]Paragraph 1
[edit]- Please add "recorded" after "is a song"
Recording and composition
[edit]Paragraph 2
[edit]- Unlink "verse"; unnecessary
- Unlink "pre-chorus"; unnecessary
- Unlink "chorus"; unnecessary
Release
[edit]- Add "2013" in parentheses after Love, Lust, Faith and Dreams please
- Rest is great!
Critical reception
[edit]- Unlink Billboard since you previously linked it in the "Recording and composition" section
Music video
[edit]Concept
[edit]- Add a reference to back up your statement in the video image please
Track listing
[edit]- This is just a matter of preference, but could you use the format as used in the article for Make Me Like You and Used to Love You; it looks more professional and it stands out more compared to what is currently used. Let me know what you decide to do please
Charts and certifications
[edit]Weekly charts
[edit]- You need to use the Template:Single chart for this entire section; please revamp accordingly.
- Comment. Is this absolutely required for GA? I have an example of a song GA that never used these templates and still was passed just fine. I was never good at messing with these things, and if you insist, I'll try, but I thought the original nominator might come back and fix it at some point - haven't seen him in a week, though.
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[edit]Fantastically and expertly written article!! Great use of sources and tons of effort has obviously been placed in this article! Bravo!! The biggest issue with the article is the "charts section". On hold for seven days; good luck!! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 22:16, 9 June 2016 (UTC).
- @DannyMusicEditor: Everything change looks great so far. Just a gentle reminder of the chart formatting switcharoo. Great work so far! Cheers, Carbrera (talk) 21:07, 13 June 2016 (UTC).
- Thanks for the ping! It's not really even my nomination, it belongs to Earthh, but I couldn't help myself as these were all so minor and it's a 30STM song, for Pete's sake. Compliment him, not me. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 21:16, 13 June 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry for the delay Carbrera, I've been really busy with my exams. I have to thank DannyMusicEditor, who addressed the main issues of the article. As for the template:single chart, there are some problems with the template's formats and automatic sources, so it is used only where it can be applied.--Earthh (talk) 19:52, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
- No problem, always happy to assist in a 30STM-related GAN. Also, let me know when you're going to nominate Love/Lust/Faith/Dreams or renominate Jared Leto. I'd be more than willing to help. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 22:51, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
- Sorry for the delay Carbrera, I've been really busy with my exams. I have to thank DannyMusicEditor, who addressed the main issues of the article. As for the template:single chart, there are some problems with the template's formats and automatic sources, so it is used only where it can be applied.--Earthh (talk) 19:52, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks for the ping! It's not really even my nomination, it belongs to Earthh, but I couldn't help myself as these were all so minor and it's a 30STM song, for Pete's sake. Compliment him, not me. dannymusiceditor Speak up! 21:16, 13 June 2016 (UTC)