Talk:Unus testis, nullus testis/GA1
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Reviewer: SpaceEconomist192 (talk · contribs) 20:31, 16 August 2023 (UTC)
- @WatkynBassett: Hi. Just to let you know that the review is done and the article has been placed on hold.
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[edit]Lead section
[edit]...again meaning that the testimony of one witness is insufficient to convict.
This sentence should be removed, no need no need to repeat the same information twice.- Done.
- Per MOS:LEADCITE, inline citations should be avoided in the lead section. The #1 and #2 sources of this version need to be removed.
- I deleted the first citation but disagree with respect to the second. In my mind the English "one man, no man" fits best in the lead. As it need not be repeated elsewhere in the article this statement would otherwise remain without a citation.
- Alright, not a problem.
- I deleted the first citation but disagree with respect to the second. In my mind the English "one man, no man" fits best in the lead. As it need not be repeated elsewhere in the article this statement would otherwise remain without a citation.
- Is unus testis-rule an established alternative name? If so, per MOS:BOLDALTNAMES, it should be bolded.
- It is not.
- (Optional) This doesn't fall under the GA criteria, but per WP:MOS#Abbreviations it's better to not make up abbreviations, I suggest either writing the full name or refer it simply as «rule».
- It is not.
Decapitalize the «c» in «Canon law» and specify that it's the catholic canon law.- Done.
The lead could have a sentence about the criticism of the rule. Here's an example, «The rule has been criticized for impeding convictions in crimes often committed by only the perpetrator and the victim»,- I implemented the suggested change - nice idea!
- The first sentence of the 2nd paragraph needs a split and it could be more clear. I suggest a rewrite to something like this, «The unus testis-rule has historical foundations in the Roman law, it was introduced by a constitution of emperor Constantine I in AD 334. It is also found in Biblical law, both in the Old and New testament».
Legal institution
[edit]All the content of this section in under the «Description and analysis» subsection. It's rather futile, it should be removed.- You are correct, embarrassing oversight.
Add a wikilink to «formalist».- Done
Add a wikilink to «law of evidence».- Done.
...which has been characterized as the "numerical system" by American legal scholar John Henry Wigmore.
What does Wigmore mean by this? A clarification is needed.- The meaning of this indeed arcane terminology is expounded in the next sentence starting with "According to this system". It is a system were you can count the number of witnesses and thereby establish whether a fact is true or not - without resorting to a fact-finding decision by a judge or jury. I tried to clarify my meaning by adding "numerical" before "system" to make sure that the reader gets that the second sentence describes this numerical system.
...a single witness to a fact was in principle
was → is- Done.
...not sufficient to establish this fact as proven...
this → a- Done.
...a larger number of witnesses was required for the establishment of certain special facts.
An example of these «special facts» would be a good addition.- This is a good idea. I am looking for an example and will report back.
- Finally found one!
- Lovely! An interesting one even.
Sometimes even a specific weight was given to a witness' testimony...
The use of «even» is editorializing, it should be removed. Also, the sentence is out of place, what's its pertinence?- Removed the "even".
- The sentence is part of the larger exposition of the system Wigmore calls the "numerical system". If you need for example three witnesses to establish a certain fact but the witnesses you provide only count as half (e.g. because they have the wrong gender etc), you actually needed six (half) witnesses. I hope this makes it a bit clearer.
...(with the notable exception of the crime of treason where two witnesses are required, see e.g., Article Three of the United States Constitution).
Is it possible to put this in an explanatory note?- Done.
...their testimony is often unreliable, inter alia, due to errors of perception...
inter alia → among others things- Done.
...received critically by some..
«by some» is a weasel word, it should be removed.- I disagree in this case: The rule has not generally been criticized so I would like to see a qualifier. Only attesting this view to the scholar in question would on the other hand give the reader the mistaken impression that it is a minority view. So I think "by some" is fine in this case.
- I checked the source and it does talk about critics in plural
Critics have called the traditional requirement of corroborative testimony...
, in that case it does corroborate such wording so its fine.- Thanks!
- I checked the source and it does talk about critics in plural
e.g. → for example- Done.
History
[edit]Roman law
[edit]Add a wikilink to «Classical Roman law» instead of just to «Roman law» (Roman law#Classical Roman law).- Nice idea.
i.e → that is- Done.
...according to current scholarly understanding...
looks like weasel wording, it should be removed.- I disagree: For legal history, this clarification is quite important as the historical legal history view was different - as is explained in the article.
- Yes my bad, after rereading it does make sense.
- I find the paragraph to be confusing, it says that according to current scholarly understanding Classical Roman Law doesn't contain the rule though historically, D. 22.5.12 was understood as evidence of the rule, so far so good, but then it says that the rule was once again introduced? Are there two instances of the rule or is D. 22.5.12 an article of the Constantine's constitution?
- I see the confusion and aspire to be a clearer writer in the future. D. 22.5.12 refers to a passage of the Digest (a six century compilation) which collected earlier statements of important Roman jurists. In this case it refers to a statement by Ulpian, a third century jurist. I tried to make this context clearer and edited the passage accordingly.
The rule is now said to have been introduced...
«now» is a relative specification of time, it should be removed.- Here I might need help: I want to express that current scholarly understanding says this and tried to use "now" as shorthand for this. What would be a better way of saying it?
Biblical foundations
[edit]The rule is not only based on Roman law but has also biblical roots.
This sentence is rather futile and the use of «but» is editorializing. The whole sentence should be removed.- I agree on the first point but would like to keep a have sentence "The rule has also biblical roots;" to make sure that the rule is not only found in Roman law but also attested to in the bible.
- Fair point, not a problem. Thought the way I see it, is that if there's a section titled Biblical foundations then its directly implicit that the rule is attested in the bible and the sentence
...the requirement of two or more witnesses is often attested to in the Old and New Testament.
is, in my opinion, enough to reinforce this. But it's also fine as it is.
- Fair point, not a problem. Thought the way I see it, is that if there's a section titled Biblical foundations then its directly implicit that the rule is attested in the bible and the sentence
- I agree on the first point but would like to keep a have sentence "The rule has also biblical roots;" to make sure that the rule is not only found in Roman law but also attested to in the bible.
Split the second sentence into two,are pointed to. While in the...
- Done.
e.g. → for example- Done.
for the adage → for the rule- Done.
are said to be the basis → are the basis- Done.
Later use and decline
[edit]Add a wikilink to «promulgated».- Done.
Add a wikilink to «acquitted».- Done.
Add a wikilink to «abrogated».- Done.
Current status
[edit]Decapitalize the «c» in «Canon law».- Done.
Add a wikilink to «canon law».- Done.
likened → compared- Done.
- A subsection about the corroboration in Scots law is needed in order for the article to be broad in coverage.
- Here I am unsure: We have a stand-alone article on Scottish corroboration and Scottish corroboration is similar, but not the same concept. It does not deal with witnesses in particular, but just argues that one needs two independent sources of evidence. I thus opted for the addition of one clarifying sentence but now a whole sub-section.
- Hmm, it's fine then. Thank you for your insight. I liked the exampled you added about the Portuguese law. :)
- Here I am unsure: We have a stand-alone article on Scottish corroboration and Scottish corroboration is similar, but not the same concept. It does not deal with witnesses in particular, but just argues that one needs two independent sources of evidence. I thus opted for the addition of one clarifying sentence but now a whole sub-section.
References check
[edit]- Checked reference #3, #6, #9, #16 and #18.
Copyvio check
[edit]- Earwig's Copyvio Detector points to 32,4% (due to quotations) (about half of the sources are in Dutch and German)
Replies
[edit]Thank you for your quick review. I had not expected the article to be picked up so soon and am for private reasons quite time-constrained at the moment. I hope to address the issues raised by you in time, but if I don't, I have every understanding for failing the article. The first batch of replies above! Thanks again! WatkynBassett (talk) 12:27, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- If they could be addressed until the end of the month it would be great. I will implement the minor suggestions myself to save us both some time. Feel free to voice your disagreement on anything. SpaceEconomist192 ✐ 13:05, 20 August 2023 (UTC)
- @SpaceEconomist192: Thank you so much for your patience – I really appreciate it and hope to be in position now to answer to all your valuable feedback and advice. I hope to have edited on all issues or at least provided an explanation for not taking up your suggestion. One exception is the example for facts which require a certain number of witnesses. I will hunt for such an example today and tomorrow. If there were any oversights by me, please point me to them! WatkynBassett (talk) 16:11, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- I found an example and added it to the article. Hope I have now got to all your great feedback! WatkynBassett (talk) 17:38, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- Great job on that example and congratulations on your 2nd good article! It was nice working with you. And don't forget to keep them coming, I will happily review them :) SpaceEconomist192 ✐ 23:18, 26 August 2023 (UTC)
- @SpaceEconomist192: Thank you so much, it was a pleasure working with you, too. Your kind understanding for my slow responsiveness at first is much appreciated. WatkynBassett (talk) 08:57, 27 August 2023 (UTC)
- Great job on that example and congratulations on your 2nd good article! It was nice working with you. And don't forget to keep them coming, I will happily review them :) SpaceEconomist192 ✐ 23:18, 26 August 2023 (UTC)