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Reviewer: Peacemaker67 (talk · contribs) 06:27, 30 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]


Many more of these to come, no doubt. A few comments:

  • suggest "USS Bougainville (CVE-100) was one of fifty Casablanca-class escort carriers built for the United States Navy during World War II."
  • suggest "entrenched on the island of Bougainville in the Solomon Islands."
  • drop the "Built for service during World War II,"
  • link ceremonial ship launching, ship commissioning and ship breaking in the lead
  • Invasion of Iwo Jima→invasion of Iwo Jima
  • the extreme width in the infobox should be covered in the body
  • the power output is in hp in the body, shp in the infobox
  • "was provided by 8eight"
  • the conversion of the Bofors guns doesn't match between the body and infobox (rounding)
  • 20-mm→20 mm, same with 40-mm
  • link United States Navy at first mention in the body
  • what does "availability" mean in this context?
  • "Manus Island in the Admiralty Islands"
  • link general quarters
  • She first supported the Vice Admiral Marc Mitscher
  • "Ulithi in the Caroline Islands"
  • did she undergo repairs after the typhoon?
  • link Reserve fleet for mothballed
  • ShipbuildingHistory.com and Hazegray.org are marginally acceptable at GA, but I wouldn't be relying on them at Milhist ACR or FAC
  • the crew numbers should be covered in the body

That's all I have. Placing on hold for the above to be addressed. Peacemaker67 (click to talk to me) 06:35, 31 March 2020 (UTC)[reply]