Talk:UPMC Presbyterian

UPMC Presbyterian has been listed as one of the Natural sciences good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: January 17, 2021. (Reviewed version).

A fact from UPMC Presbyterian appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 10 February 2021 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that American Nobel Prize laureate Herbert A. Simon underwent surgery at UPMC Presbyterian to remove a cancerous tumor in his abdomen in January 2001?

A record of the entry may be seen at Wikipedia:Recent additions/2021/February. The nomination discussion and review may be seen at Template:Did you know nominations/UPMC Presbyterian.

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Vancouver citation style

@Andrew nyr:What do you think on specifying an attribute to force the Vancouver citation style for all the references, because currently some names only have initials while other full names. Alternatively, initials there should also be replaced to full names if you don't like Vancouver here. Anyway, some names are in all uppercase letters, and this should be fixed so only the first letter of a full name word is uppercase, not ALL CAPS. Maxim Masiutin (talk) 22:51, 25 November 2020 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:UPMC Presbyterian/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk · contribs) 23:14, 13 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Andrew nyr, nice to see another hospital nominated. I'll be reviewing this soon. HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 23:14, 13 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

HickoryOughtShirt?4, Alright, I am 99% sure I fixed everything. Thank you for the detailed information on what to fix. I tried to get everything ready before the GA review, but after reading the same words multiple times they all seem to blend together. Sometimes all you need is an objective third-party. Thanks again, Andrew nyrtalkcontribs 04:17, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

Andrew nyr, thank you for the speedy fixes

. I am passing the article, way to go! HickoryOughtShirt?4 (talk) 06:17, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

HickoryOughtShirt?4, Once again, it has been a pleasure working with you. Hope to see you soon! In the meantime, Lets go Rangers! Andrew nyrtalkcontribs 06:59, 17 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall: Pass
Pass/Fail:

Lead

Normally I would ask if two references were needed for non-profit, but I can see this could be construed as a controversial claim so I am OK with leaving it.
The lead is meant to summarize the article, I don't see mentions of UPMC Presbyterian is also connected via enclosed pedestrian bridges and tunnels to UPMC Montefiore hospital, UPMC Western Psychiatric Hospital, the Eye & Ear Institute, Falk Clinic, the University of Pittsburgh School of Nursing's Victoria Hall, the University of Pittsburgh's Lothrop Hall student residence, and multiple university biomedical science towers in the body of the article.

History

Not sure how I feel about UPMC Presbyterian dates back to the dreams of Louise Wotring Lyle. Unless she actually had dreams about it, this can be seen as "promotional."
- Side note 1: In the article, it mentions she started the hospital "on $5," can this be incorporated?
- Side note 2: Louise Wotring Lyle should probably have an article
Please define shortening of Pitt before its first use (ie. University of Pittsburgh (Pitt) )
It's a bit awk to have one sentence by itself. Please merge On November 1, 1926, Children's became the first hospital in the Oakland neighborhood on the campus of the University of Pittsburgh.
Reference 24, 31 doesn't support its claim
Reference 28 and 29 need a specific page (and the other refs are dead)
I think you should get rid of ref 32 because ref 33 is more reliable and contains both claims
Please WL Polio
Ref 34 doesn't say he went on CBS radio to report a successful test
The Jewish Chronicle is a newspaper. Please convert ref 35 in cite news not cite web
In 1981, add comma after date
under the direction of Dr. Thomas E., you already mentioned his name so pls just use last name here
Please reformat ref 41
The last two sentences use the same ref so don't use it twice. Remove the ref after tacrolimus
In the 1970s, the name of the hospital was changed to Presbyterian-University Hospital to reflect the increased academic affiliation., unsourced
Please WL Andrew Schneider (journalist) and The Pittsburgh Press
- Also, the article explicitly says Undue ER delay Andrew Schneider's article last Sunday on Presbyterian-University Hospital ("Presbyterian's emergency room criticized") from my perspective is very accurate. So, some people were for his article and others were against it.
Ref 45 doesn't support the claim
- Please merge In 1986, Presbyterian merged with the nearby Montefiore Hospital to create the University of Pittsburgh Medical Center, later changing the name to UPMC Presbyterian and Under Starzl, by 1988 Presbyterian Hospital had grown to have one of the world's largest transplant programs with more than half of the worlds' transplants taking place at Presbyterian into one big paragraph

Modern day

Are three references needed for In 2017 UPMC Presbyterian chair of orthopedics, Freddie Fu performed a repair to European soccer star Zlatan Ibrahimovic's knee after Ibrahimovic tore his ACL during a game
Can 2017 and 2018 be merged? Like just say, the following year
- I suggest merging 2017 and 2018 pre: Tree of Life synagogue which can be its own paragraph

Awards

Can some of the 2020 awards be merged into one paragraph?

References

Reference 18 doesn't work for me, both the original and archive link
Reference 21 needs a page number at least. The current link is useless unless specifics are accessed.
Reference 26, 27, 30, are dead
Ref 36/7 needs a page number (also, pls merge these refs as they are the same)
Ref 47 needs a page number
Ref 58, 80, 81, 86, 88, 115 should be cite news not cite web
- Ref 88 should be The Patriot-News
Clean up ref 59 and 110 (ie. author, properly format title)
Ref 113 & 114 should have the publisher as Becker's Hospital Review
Ref 87 needs author
Please keep all dates used for refs consistent (ie. ref 116 says 28 May 2019 but nearly all other refs are dated like 2013-05-23)

Did you know nomination

The following is an archived discussion of the DYK nomination of the article below. Please do not modify this page. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page (such as this nomination's talk page, the article's talk page or Wikipedia talk:Did you know), unless there is consensus to re-open the discussion at this page. No further edits should be made to this page.

The result was: promoted by SL93 (talk) 21:18, 6 February 2021 (UTC)[reply]

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UPMC Presbyterian Hospital, Pittsburgh, as seen from Schenley Park

... that in January 2001, American Nobel Prize laureate, Herbert A. Simon underwent surgery at UPMC Presbyterian to remove a cancerous tumor in his abdomen? Source:https://www.nytimes.com/2001/02/10/business/herbert-a-simon-dies-at-84-won-a-nobel-for-economics.html (and [link] the source, or cite it briefly without using citation templates)

Improved to Good Article status by Andrew nyr (talk). Self-nominated at 05:49, 18 January 2021 (UTC).[reply]

This article is a newly promoted GA and meets the newness and length criteria. The image is suitably licensed, the hook facts are cited inline, the article is neutral and I detected no copyright issues. No QPQ needed. Cwmhiraeth (talk) 19:58, 19 January 2021 (UTC)[reply]