Talk:UNICEF club/GA2

GA Review

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Nominator: Johnson524 (talk · contribs) 06:26, 20 March 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: SSSB (talk · contribs) 01:17, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

I'll tackle this one. It's nice and short, so hopefully I'll finish my initial review today. SSSB (talk) 01:17, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable, as shown by a source spot-check.

   a (reference section): b (inline citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have non-free use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

Comments

• Copyvio check shows no issues. Will obviously look more closely when reviewing sources. SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
• "Since the clubs first began to be made in 1952," I know what you mean with this sentence, but it is phrased really strangly. For starters, clubs aren't really made. They are founded. I would suggest "SInce the first clubs were founded in 1952". SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
• I'm going to be really pedantic: "other countries such as Canada and Hong Kong." Hong Kong isn't a country, it is a special administrative region. The country would be China. SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
• In this sentence: "including running errands, raking leaves, selling comic books, etc." having both including and etc. are redundent (as they both exist to indicate an incomplete list. I would change this to "including running errands, raking leaves and selling comic books". SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
• "were developed later through time." again, "through time" is redundent. SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
• "Advisors must be adults aged 25 years or older, and not a staff member for UNICEF" again, I am going to be pedantic. The source says that advisors should not be a staff member, not that they mustn't be. SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
• "Clubs are required to re-register and submit yearly funds at the start of each consecutive school year." the word consecutive is unnecessary here. SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)
• "takes place on Halloween on 31 October," feels unnecessary to specify that Halloween is on 31 Oct. This is fairly common knowledge is most of the world. Where it isn't known, the wikilink provides the relevant details. SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

These are the only issues I could find. They exclusively revolve around it being well written. I couldn't access any of the newspaper sources (not having a subscription) but all the non-newspaper sources (and I did check all) were good, so I will assume good faith. Will place on hold to allow necessary changes to be made. SSSB (talk) 12:18, 1 January 2025 (UTC)

@SSSB: Thank you for taking up this nom! All the changes outlined above have been made. If you have any further changes you'd like to see made, feel free to contact me and I'd be happy to make them. Cheers! Johnson524 15:21, 2 January 2025 (UTC)

Looks good. Congratulations on another good article. SSSB (talk) 10:20, 3 January 2025 (UTC)

The discussion above is closed. Please do not modify it. Subsequent comments should be made on the appropriate discussion page. No further edits should be made to this discussion.