Talk:U.S. Route 13 in Delaware/GA1
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Reviewer: Coemgenus (talk · contribs) 13:33, 6 January 2015 (UTC)
I'll review this one over the next couple of days. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:33, 6 January 2015 (UTC)
Checklist
[edit]- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- a (major aspects): b (focused):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
[edit]This looks great overall. I have only a few comments:
- Lede
- "The construction of DE 1 necessitated the realignment of US before13 in a couple places." This sounds a little imprecise. Does a couple mean "two" here, or "a few"? If "two," I'd say "two"; if not, "several" might do.
- Changed to "two". Dough4872 01:45, 8 January 2015 (UTC)
- History
- Where you say "Prior to US 13", it's a little awkward, because it's the same actual roads, right? I think you mean something more like "before the US routes were numbered, or something."
- Changed. Dough4872 01:45, 8 January 2015 (UTC)
- "In 1950, recommendations were made..." By whom?
- Mentioned. Dough4872 01:45, 8 January 2015 (UTC)
- That's all for now. I'll take a second read later, but it looks pretty good already.
- With those changes, I think it's good to go. Nice article. I'll think it next time I drive down US 13. --Coemgenus (talk) 13:13, 8 January 2015 (UTC)