Talk:Typhoon Dujuan (2003)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yellow Evan (talk · contribs) 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

"Typhoon Dujuan (international designation: 0313,[1] JTWC designation: 14W,[2] PAGASA name: Onyok[3]) was the strongest tropical cyclone to strike the Pearl River delta since Typhoon Hope in 1979" link to 1979 PTS when you say "1979". YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- I don't think the season article link is needed when I already link to the storm. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Dujuan weakened to severe tropical storm status before making landfall on September 2 in southern China," what's a "severe tropical storm"? (I know what it is, but the average American that sits and eats all day may not :P ). YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Added link. That work? --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
", naming it Onyok.[3]" link to List of tropical cyclone names here. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Agreed! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"Radar from the Hong Kong Observatory indicated in inner eye about 20 km (12 mi) in diameter," "in" to "an". YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Err, yes. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"there was about NT$200 (TWD, $115 million USD)" was about $200 in what? damages? french toasts? basketballs? scooters? Also, you sure it was $200 or $200 million. Or does Twain have no inflation? :P YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Fixed. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
"for the first time since Typhoon York 1999.[6][16] " missing an "in". And link to York 99/1999 PTS's articles. YE ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]
- Added. --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

In all, very good. Y E ^Pacific ^Hurricane 01:43, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]

Thanks! --♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 02:01, 12 November 2013 (UTC)[reply]