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Reviewer: Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk · contribs) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
Will take this one. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 00:45, 8 November 2017 (UTC)
- Krishna Chaitanya Velaga Can I request that this article be the next of mine (You're reviewing 3 others of mine I believe) that you review? It's the last article I need for a Good Topic. Cheers. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 19:35, 13 November 2017 (UTC)
- Lead and infobox;
- My first comment on lead is cut it down. It gives too much detail. Remove the points that are not worthy of summary. Per WP:LEADLENGTH, an article of this size (less than 15000 characters), lead must be no longer that 2 paras.
Done
- Link "marks" currency in infobox
Done
- Per MOS:DATERANGE, the year ranges must have en dashes.
Done
- Link the units in infobox; waterline, standard load, overall, design load, nautical miles etc.
Done
- The descriptions of values in infobox like Overall, At waterline, Maximum speed etc. must not have initial capitals. Just "overall", "at waterline" etc.
Done
- Section 1;
- abbreviate the units from second mention, all through the article
Done
- Everything looks fine. Just a few links are to made for the units on first mention.
Done
- Section 1.1;
- After
their ship"the" trials Done
- "1938-1939" use en dash
Done
- Inconsistent usage of conversion template; "114m (374 ft)" "114.4 metres (375 ft)"; fix it
Done
- "1940-1942" en dash
Done
- After
- Section 2;
- What is "steel 51"? Link if possible, else provide a foot note.
Done
- "54,749,000 Marks" remove initial capitals from currency
Done
- Two
of theships Done
- 10 "November" and 25 November
Done
- on 2 "January" and 7 January
Done
- 242-245; use en dash
Done
- sailed to Swinemünde
to have her damage"to get" repaired Done
- Comma after "After this"
Done
- Link "North Sea"
- Put italics on "Kriegsmarine"
Done
- Please be consistent on "World War II" and "Second World War". Also link it on the first mention.
Done
- and other destroyers; better be specific on this, the phrase "other destroyers" seems vague, it doesn't clearly whether they're the destroyers of this class or other German destroyers. Please recheck the usage over entire paragraph.
Done
- NO plagiarism found, image OK.
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 04:00, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Done. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:41, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Iazyges: Everything looks fine. But please cut the down the lead a bit. It is not about the paras, but about the size in general. No reader will be interested to read too much in the lead. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 06:21, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: I've cut it down significantly. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:19, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Iazyges: Hey, looks great. Everything is quite OK. But see there is some referencing error. It is being displayed at the end of the page. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 07:49, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Fixed; I had forgot to tell the footnote where to go. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:53, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Iazyges: Hey, looks great. Everything is quite OK. But see there is some referencing error. It is being displayed at the end of the page. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 07:49, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: I've cut it down significantly. -- Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 07:19, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Iazyges: Everything looks fine. But please cut the down the lead a bit. It is not about the paras, but about the size in general. No reader will be interested to read too much in the lead. Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 06:21, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- @Krishna Chaitanya Velaga: Done. Iazyges Consermonor Opus meum 05:41, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Regards, Krishna Chaitanya Velaga (talk • mail) 08:46, 15 November 2017 (UTC)
- Pass/Fail: