Talk:Twink Twining/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: BeanieFan11 (talk · contribs) 15:16, 17 October 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: WikiOriginal-9 (talk · contribs) 14:18, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose, spelling, and grammar): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR): d (copyvio and plagiarism):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

• Revised a cat.
• Added cats.
• Add professional to lead.
  • Added.
• Link baseball in lead I guess?
  • Added.
• Link basketball in lead also.
  • Added.
• Can you add his full name to the first sentence of the early life section. It's not obvious where it's coming from (I know it's from BBR though).
  • Added.
• "best pitchers in college baseball" link college baseball.
  • Done.
• "Twining began his professional baseball career after having graduated from Swarthmore in 1915 with a team in Chester" change to "After having graduated from Swarthmore in 1915, Twining began his professional baseball career with a team in Chester, Pennsylvania"
  • Changed.
• "He also played for a team in Media" Let's just spell out Media, Pennsylvania.
  • Added.
• "manager of the Cincinnati Reds of Major League Baseball" link Major League Baseball.
  • Linked.
• "Abington, Hahnemann and Wilmington" link those
  • Linked Abington / Wilmington, not sure what I'd link Hahnemann?

Interesting article. I like the picture of him on the football team. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 14:18, 18 October 2024 (UTC)

• @WikiOriginal-9: I think I addressed everything. Someone seemed really upset that it said he received a doctorate from Swarthmore ("Swarthmore College has never had a medical school! It is solely a liberal arts college. If anyone had done adequate research, instead of blindly following the b.s. you find on commercial websites like Newspapers.com, (which of course you can't refer to without paying for a subscription), it would have been discovered that after Swarthmore, Twining attended and graduated from Hahnemann Medical College in Philadelphia.") when apparently it was Hahnemann (I guess the source is wrong?) – so I changed that too. BeanieFan11 (talk) 22:39, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

  Nice work. ~WikiOriginal-9~ (talk) 22:43, 19 October 2024 (UTC)

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