Talk:Turkey Tolson Tjupurrula/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: Tomcat7 (talk · contribs) 11:46, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

GA review (see here for what the criteria are, and here for what they are not)

1. It is reasonably well written.

   a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):

2. It is factually accurate and verifiable.

   a (references): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):

3. It is broad in its coverage.

   a (major aspects): b (focused):

4. It follows the neutral point of view policy.

   Fair representation without bias:

5. It is stable.

   No edit wars, etc.:

6. It is illustrated by images, where possible and appropriate.

   a (images are tagged and non-free images have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):

7. Overall:

   Pass/Fail:

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• "and the longest-serving chairman of the Papunya Tula Artists company." -suggest replacing the underline with "its"
• "Contemporary Indigenous Australian art of the western desert began" - suggest to replace it with eg "arose", to avoid two times "began"
• " geeometrical" - geometrical?--Tomcat (7) 19:16, 27 November 2012 (UTC)

Thank you Tomcat, that was much appreciated, and I have made changes in response to you three points. hamiltonstone (talk) 00:00, 28 November 2012 (UTC)