Talk:Tule Island/GA1
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Reviewer: The Rambling Man (talk · contribs) 12:40, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
Comments
- Similar to the other small island article, this feels too short to be a good article but we'll go with the flow and see what we get.
- I think it might be a stretch for this one; I scoured existing references pretty well, but I could try to come up with some more.
- "farm potatoes, which now consists mostly" perhaps "but which now" or "and which".
Have copyedited this sentence a little.
- "USGS aerial imagery ..." fragment, no full stop.
Fixed.
- " City of Stockton" why is "City" capitalised?
No particularly good reason, fixed.
- "as a fishing location" you didn't link fishing in the lead?
Sure, why not.
- "the 1959 musical" no need for that year.
Fixed.
- "Fern-Headreach-Tule complex" what is that?
Added some description in "Geography".
- "The Modesto Bee" The is part of the name.
Fixed.
- "$5 to $6 million" maybe $5–6 million. And inflate.
Done.
- Ref 6 SHOUTING.
Fixed. That's it. The Rambling Man (Keep wearing the mask...) 18:09, 7 September 2021 (UTC)
- @The Rambling Man: Well, there we go. jp×g 08:12, 8 September 2021 (UTC)