Talk:Tropical Storm Mekkhala (2015)/GA1

GA Review

Article (edit | visual edit | history) · Article talk (edit | history) · Watch

Reviewer: 12george1 (talk · contribs) 01:57, 11 December 2015 (UTC)

I might as well review this one, too. Actually, the only issue I have is the short lead. For example, you have an MH with three decent-sized paragraphs, but have only four sentences about it (two of which are short sentences). More could also be said about the storm's impact, such as info about damage to agriculture and houses. Overall, this is a very decent article though and I will likely have no problem listing it as a Good Article after this issue is dealt with.--12george1 (talk) 02:07, 11 December 2015 (UTC)

Thanks. I expanded the lead a bit. Better? ♫ Hurricanehink (talk) 16:40, 11 December 2015 (UTC)

That looks better. I will now pass this article--12george1 (talk) 16:50, 11 December 2015 (UTC)