Talk:Trondheim Airport Station/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: ---Dough4872 01:41, 15 November 2009 (UTC)
Comments:

1. In sentence "Situated on the Nordland Line, it serves both express trains and the Trøndelag Commuter Rail, both operated by Norges Statsbaner.", remove the comma after "rail" and the second "both" as it is redundant.
2. "but under roof" sounds awkward, "but sheltered" would work better.
3. The sentence "Luggage trolleys are available." is too short and should be combined with another sentence in that section.
4. In the sentence "There is a single track at the platform, but the station is built in such a way that the platform can easily be converted to become a center platform with two tracks", you use "platform" three times. Can you replace at least one instance with another word?

I am placing the article on hold. ---Dough4872 01:41, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

Done. Thank you for the review. Arsenikk ^(talk) 10:36, 15 November 2009 (UTC)

I will pass the article. ---Dough4872 16:43, 15 November 2009 (UTC)