Talk:Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's

Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's has been listed as one of the Sports and recreation good articles under the good article criteria. If you can improve it further, please do so. If it no longer meets these criteria, you can reassess it.
Review: August 19, 2016. (Reviewed version).

A fact from Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's appeared on Wikipedia's Main Page in the Did you know column on 18 August 2016 (check views). The text of the entry was as follows:

Did you know... that Jonathan Brownlee collapsed almost immediately after crossing the finish line at the men's triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics?

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Transition times

How come there are no transition times on the results section? 86.180.106.99 (talk) 12:28, 4 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Explained in key. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 11:12, 7 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Language

Should it not be tagged for UK English? (medalist => medallist, for example). Nedrutland (talk) 08:44, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@Nedrutland: Feel free to tag and convert. I'm Australian so I'm not sure what needs to be changed. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 09:04, 8 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

GA Review

This review is transcluded from Talk:Triathlon at the 2012 Summer Olympics – Men's/GA1. The edit link for this section can be used to add comments to the review.

Reviewer: MWright96 (talk · contribs) 07:03, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Will review. MWright96 (talk) 07:03, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

It is reasonably well written.
a (prose): b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
It is factually accurate and verifiable.
a (reference section): b (citations to reliable sources): c (OR):
It is broad in its coverage.
a (major aspects): b (focused):
It follows the neutral point of view policy.
Fair representation without bias:
It is stable.
No edit wars, etc.:
It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales): b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
Overall:
Pass/Fail:

no dab links

Qualification

Could you clarify what an NOC is?
"If an athlete had already qualified through another method the NOC didn't receive another quota with it instead going to the next NOC on the ITU Olympic Qualification List." - did not
Delink the continents per WP:OVERLINK
Spell out the ITU on the first instance and leave the acroymn in brackets
The Great Britain wikilink should be to Great Britain at the 2012 Summer Olympics and not to the island

Course

Add adj=on to the convert template for 1.5 kilometres (0.93 mi), 43 kilometres (27 mi), 6.137 kilometres (3.813 mi) and 2.5 kilometres (1.6 mi)
"one big lap." - unencyclopedic
"The course then quickly left Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill." - The course then quickly turned left towards Hyde Park to go past Buckingham Palace on Constitution Hill

References

no dead links

That is all I found. On hold. MWright96 (talk) 08:29, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

@MWright96: Thanks for your review, I have implemented all of your points. - Yellow Dingo (talk) 08:56, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]

Good work. Promoting to GA class. MWright96 (talk) 11:37, 19 August 2016 (UTC)[reply]