Talk:Travis Dermott/GA1
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Reviewer: Nova Crystallis (talk · contribs) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
I'll take a look over the next few days. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 07:17, 12 April 2020 (UTC)
- Lead needs more on his professional career.
Done - Probably should link minor ice hockey to timbits hockey. Done
- "After being named to the OJHL's 2nd Team All-Stars[11] and Fan Favourite[12] he committed to play for the Erie Otters on May 4, 2013." Comma before ref 12.
- No need to relink OHL and Erie Otters one paragraph after. Done
- "before they were ultimately eliminated." By who? Done
- Link Utica Comets. Done
- De-link Kapanen's second mention. Done
- Dash needed for 7-game. Done
- "However" WP:EDITORIAL. Done
- Awards and honours section needs the references (Ref.) label for the column of the table. Done
That's about it. Nova Crystallis (Talk) 21:44, 14 April 2020 (UTC)