Talk:Trópico (Ricardo Arjona album)/GA1

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Reviewer: Yash! (talk · contribs) 04:28, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

I'll be reviewing it. — Yash ^[talk] 04:28, 9 January 2013 (UTC)

Lead

• is a compilation album - a? I mean, cannot it be like first? second?
  • Not exactly which would it be. he has released like 25. let me take a look.
• The album is composed - The album consists
• and performed either - which are performed either
• or by other latin musicians - or by other latin artists
• Several songs included in Trópico - Several songs included in the album
• eight years prior - eight years before
• borrowed - any better word other than this?
• It also received a positive critical reception, with Jason Birchmeier from Allmusic awarding the album three-and-a-half stars out of five. - The album received positive critical reception, with Jason Birchmeier from Allmusic awarding the album three-and-a-half stars out of five.

Composition

• Trópico is a collection of Arjona's past - The album is a collection of Arjona's past - because "the album" would sound odd in the second line following this
• eight years prior, in 2001 - what? eight years prior? 2001? I guess we live in 2009 =P - you have also used "eight years" in the lead so please be factually accurate and consistent
• Any link for "Puerto Rican" ?
• included in Trópico is a - included in Trópico was a
• Huey Dunbar performed "Desnuda". The song was originally - Huey Dunbar performed "Desnuda" which was originally
• the album is performed - the album was performed
• Also, the album - The album also

Reception

• On its second week, the album jumped to position 62. Two weeks later, Trópico reached number 23 - In its second week, the album jumped to position 62 and two weeks later, Trópico reached number 23
• Remove the template since you have already stated the thing about 3.5* in the lead as well as in the prose.

— Yash ^[talk] 14:13, 10 January 2013 (UTC)

• • Okay done all :) — ΛΧΣ²¹ 21:56, 10 January 2013 (UTC)
    • ✓ Pass Yash! has retired. Passing since all issues mentioned by Yash! were fixed. Vacation9 01:41, 30 January 2013 (UTC)