Talk:Toy Story/GA1

GA Review

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This article does not meet the good article criteria and has too many issues. It has therefore failed its nomination. Issues include but are not limited to:

• Insufficient references
• Reference for "Lasseter went on to work at Lucasfilm and later as a founding member of Pixar."?

 Done ~SunDragon34 (talk) 08:56, 31 January 2009 (UTC)

• "The script went through many changes before the final version. Lasseter decided Tinny was "too antiquated", and the character was changed to a military action figure, and then given a space theme. Tinny's name changed to Lunar Larry, then Tempus from Morph, and eventually Buzz Lightyear (after astronaut Buzz Aldrin)."?

 Done Tim Bennett (talk) 00:06, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

• "In 2003, the Online Film Critics Society ranked the film as the greatest animated film of all time.[19] In 2005 the film was selected for preservation in the United States National Film Registry, one of three films to be selected in its first year of eligibility.[20] In 2007, the film was ranked #99 on the American Film Institute's 10th Anniversary Edition special on the 100 greatest American films of all time. It was one of only two animated films on the list, the other being Snow White and the Seven Dwarfs."?

 Done - condensed and referenced. Tim Bennett (talk) 00:14, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

• The information is organized too erratically.
• Lead's fourth paragraph is short; merge it.

 Done ~SunDragon34 (talk) 19:15, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

• Plot is too long, especially for a relatively simple film when compared to others like The Dark Knight (film)

 Done Tim Bennett (talk) 00:04, 8 December 2008 (UTC)

• "History" needs better organization in general; there are too many short paragraphs
• "Reception" and "Awards" should be with "Release" down near the bottom

 Done ~SunDragon34 (talk) 19:15, 5 December 2008 (UTC)

• "Release" should be in prose

 Done ~SunDragon34 (talk) 07:08, 10 March 2009 (UTC)

Once these issues have been resolved, please feel free to renominate this article. Thanks! Gary King (talk) 16:28, 3 December 2008 (UTC)