Talk:Tonga at the 2014 Winter Olympics/GA1

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Reviewer: Sportsfan77777 (talk · contribs) 17:18, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Tonga made its Winter Olympics debut at the 2014 Winter Olympics in Sochi, Russia from <<<=== Re-word to avoid repeating Winter Olympics. Maybe: "Tonga made its Winter Olympics debut at the 2014 Sochi Olympics in Russia from
The name change thing should be in the lead."

The 2014 Winter Olympics were held from 7–23 February 2014, a total of 2,780 athletes representing 88 National Olympic Committees took part. <<<=== That comma should be a semi-colon
Add something that says it is unusual for Tonga to compete at the Winter Olympics because they are a tropical island in the Pacific Ocean.
- Added Tropical nations at the Winter Olympics to the See Also section, but I can't really source this as it is hardly unusual for tropical islands to compete at the Winter Olympics anymore. Courcelles (talk) 19:34, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
  - Okay, good enough. Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:43, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]

Tonga qualified (add "for") a place
event ~~during~~ at the 2013–14 Luge World Cup
- The World Cup is a series of events held in many different locations. Courcelles (talk) 19:34, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
Add Banani's background as a rugby player.
Add that Banani had been training in luge for five years.
each day, the final mark <<=== That comma should be a semi-colon

Two replies inline, everything else addressed without commentary. Thanks for the review, Sportsfan77777. Courcelles (talk) 19:35, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]
- Looks good, passed! Sportsfan77777 (talk) 19:43, 30 October 2018 (UTC)[reply]