Talk:Tommy Lawton/GA1
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Reviewer: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Hi! I will be reviewing this in the next few days. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 13:19, 9 June 2016 (UTC)
Fairly well-written, only a few comments: Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:49, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
- Early life
- What does "Snr" mean?
- It means senior in British English, apparenrly Americans just say sr. I just changed it to senior to avoid confusion.--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
- I am not sure if links are needed for the professions of the parents
- Lawton's natural ability What ability is being referred to here?
- Club career
- Link "Centre-forward" at first mention
- Personal
- Don't begin the section with "He", say "Lawton".
- He published a total of four books...When the Cheering Stopped (1973). Source?
- Career statistics
- The section can have a similar line preceding the table stating that ref. 2 is the source for the table (as implied)
Rest looks good to me. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 08:49, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
- OK, thanks again!--EchetusXe 14:31, 12 June 2016 (UTC)
- Just looked at the references. I think ref 132 should rather be a note. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 07:53, 14 June 2016 (UTC)
Fine, promoted. Sainsf (talk · contribs) 11:07, 16 June 2016 (UTC)