Talk:Today the Sun's on Us/GA1

GA Review

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Reviewer: HĐ (talk · contribs) 12:42, 10 July 2014 (UTC)

Lead

• "the English recording artist..." Why do you include "the" in this sentence?

• The article is written in British English, therefore it follows the variant's rules.

• "...and others" change to "...while others"

• Not done. It would provide weak contrast (the tone of the song doesn't really relate to the singer's vocals).

• "...and features Ellis-Bextor and her boyfriend following another couple, and eventually stealing them" I can't clearly understand this

• Reworded.

Recording and composition

• There is a {{disambiguation needed}}

• Fixed.

• "...the English musician" Once again, why "the"?
• "...the Swedish songwriter" Again

• Rules of BrEng.

• "and discusses "appreciating the good times"" seems a bit odd to me

• Slightly reworded.

Music video

• Do we have any reviews for the video?

• Unfortunately, no.

Overall

• Ref. 13 has problem.

• Fixed.

•  On hold Simon (talk) 04:20, 12 July 2014 (UTC)

• All issues have been replied to or fixed. Thank you for your review, Simon! pedro | talk 11:59, 13 July 2014 (UTC)

• Well, nothing to concern anymore. Passing, well done! Simon (talk) 14:30, 13 July 2014 (UTC)