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Reviewer: Mm40 (talk) 14:44, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

Hi, I'm Mm40 (talk · contribs) and I'll be reviewing the article against the good article criteria. I'll be watching this page, so you should leave any comments/questions here.

There are no major problems in the article, as (upon a spot check), references support what is given in-text, it's NPOV, and, although short, the article seems to be broad enough in coverage when faced with the number of sources available.

References
  • One exception to the last of those (broad in coverage) is the lack of chart information or sales figures. I saw in the last review that you weren't able to find such information, which I understand. However, [1] supports that the album never charted (and it can be used to reference the track list, if you feel it's necessary)
  • The MTV podcast (reference 6) should have a time range for when the claim is supported. You should add "Event occurs at 1:00–1:30." at the end of the reference, of course using the correct times
    • It turns out that that source is now dead due to a layout change, but do we really need a source to back up the fact that they have disbanded? It's not exactly a contestable issue. --REZTER TALK ø 16:13, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
  • Reference 3 (Calgary Sun) is a dead link; as it's a newspaper article, however, you can just cite it like a normal newspaper article
  • Why is babysue a reliable source? I know it's used for a review, but we need some evidence that others in the music industry consider it a respectable source
  • According to the MoS, reference names shouldn't be in ALL-CAPS even if they are on the source
General
  • I highly recommend that a copy-editor go through the article after this review; there's a few basic grammar issues, such as missing commas
  • There's a few contractions, such as "he'd" and "didn't"
Lead
  • The lead should be expanded a bit; perhaps say when work on the album started, that Rubin wasn't originally going to help, and that it didn't chart (see first bullet above)
  • The lead image needs some sort of caption
    • The cover art? There are loads of Good and Featured album articles that don't caption the cover art, also, what kind of caption would it need?
History
Musical style
Reception
Personnel

Overall, the article is pretty good, and most if the issues will be pretty easy to fix. I'm now putting the article on hold for seven days to allow you to fix the issues I've brought up. After they are resolved, I'll pass the article. Cheers, Mm40 (talk) 14:44, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]

I've made changes per your comments. --REZTER TALK ø 16:13, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]
OK, as all my issues are resolved, I'm passing the article now. Thanks for your contributions, and consider reviewing an article at GAN to keep the backlog down. Cheers, Mm40 (talk) 16:50, 4 April 2010 (UTC)[reply]