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Reviewer: K. Peake (talk · contribs) 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]


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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV ()
3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant ()
Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

Another nice looking article, which I will review shortly! --K. Peake 07:20, 6 February 2022 (UTC)[reply]

Infobox and lead

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  • Infobox looks good!
    • Thanks.
  • "is no. 45 in" → "is No. 45 in"
    • Fixed.
  • The best-known works part should be not be in the first para, as this info belongs around the area of the things mentioned as noted are
    • Fixed.
  • Remove wikilink on Poland
    • Done.
  • The subtitle sentence should be the second one of the first para instead
    • Fixed.

Context

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  • Good
    • Noted.

Song

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Music and verse form

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  • Add text to the audio sample to establish relevance, plus the file is missing United States tag
    • Done.
  • Pipe 6
    8
    time to Time signature
    • Done. I'll note that this discards information; should Time signature ever become better structured, it might be that each time gets a subsection, at which point the new pipe will cause the link to fail to redirect properly. This is a general point, that redirects are often more specific than pipes even where they seem momentarily equivalent.
  • Pipe ariette to Aria
    • Done.
  • "and its French performers brought it to Stockholm's" → "and was brought to Stockholm's" adding "by its French performers" after the theatre
    • Not sure that passive for active is an improvement.
  • Remove "the" before musicologist
    • No, this is a normal British usage.
  • "and the reality that the epistle was describing." → "and the reality described on the epistle."
    • Done.

Lyrics

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  • The writing years are not mentioned by the source
    • Kommentar tab, fixed. Massengale confirms.
  • "The shoe-mender hits him," → "The shoe-mender hits Mollberg,"
    • Done.

Reception and legacy

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  • "calls it a" → "calls the epstile a"
    • Reworded.
  • "Britten Austin explains that this" → "Austin explains that this" unless that is not the real name, then keep as Britten Austin
    • BA is the surname.
  • "Britten Austin notes that Mollberg is" → "Austin notes that Mollberg is" unless the above is true
    • Ditto.
  • "how another member of the Order of Bacchus, Kilberg, meets" → "how fellow Order of Bacchus member Kilberg meets"
    • Done.
  • If "a barrel is dripping"." is the end of a full sentence in the original source, then punctuation should be inside speech marks
    • Done.
  • "inspired Bellman to song, but that this epistle" → "inspired Bellman's work, but this epistle"
    • Reworded.
  • Pipe EMI to EMI Records if this is the label referenced
    • Done.
  • "is corroborated by" → "is corroborated by the"
    • Done.
  • "in Fredman's ep. 45"." → "in Fredman's ep. 45."" since this is a full sentence
    • Done.
  • Pipe Lake Mälaren to Mälaren on the img text
    • Done.
  • Remove wikilink on Sätra for the second img
    • Done.

References

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  • Add the language parameters to refs 10 and 13
    • Added.

Sources

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  • Good
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  • Good, especially with the YouTube publishers added!
    • Thanks.

Final comments and verdict

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