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Reviewer: IDV (talk · contribs) 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
I'll do this one. I expect to get it done within a day or two.--IDVtalk 02:27, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- a (reference section):
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- a (major aspects):
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
- Pass/Fail:
Lead/infobox
[edit]- Intervals for the publishers should use – rather than -.
- While fine to list in prose under a "release" heading, in the infobox we generally only list release dates for major English-speaking regions+region of the developer/publisher, so the Japanese release date should probably be removed.
Gameplay
[edit]- You should write NPCs as "non-playable characters" on the first mention.
- I might be wrong here, but shouldn't it be "the player character attacks enemies highlighted with the mouse"? To me, "by the mouse" makes it sound like the mouse has a will of its own and isn't controlled by the player.
The main addition is a new Mastery titled Dream Mastery: available to new players,
- sorry, what do you mean by "available to new players"?- The image is hard to read - I only see a brown field with colorful splodges on it. Could you perhaps specify what I'm looking at? If the player is shown (I can't tell - I haven't played the game), you could mention their location on screen, etc.
Plot
[edit], is launching an attack on the living world now the more powerful Olympians
- should be "now that the more powerful Olympians"
Development and release
[edit]- Write out intellectual property in full and link it
Reception
[edit]- There is a discussion about Steam Spy at the VG project's talk page about sources, and it seems like Steam Spy creates estimates, which may not necessarily be accurate. If a reliable source reports on the numbers, you can use that, but not Steam Spy itself.
Comments
[edit]@ProtoDrake: This article is pretty good, and just needs some minor fixes. I'm placing this On hold for a week; if everything is done by then, I'll pass the article.--IDVtalk 13:15, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- I've done my best to address the issues raised. --ProtoDrake (talk) 13:34, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks, that was quick! Congratulations, Titan Quest: Immortal Throne is now a
Good Article.--IDVtalk 14:36, 19 June 2016 (UTC)
- Thanks, that was quick! Congratulations, Titan Quest: Immortal Throne is now a