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Reviewer: FormalDude (talk · contribs) 07:48, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
I will post updates here as I complete the review. Please allow up to seven days for the review to be completed. ––FormalDude talk 07:48, 9 January 2022 (UTC)
- It is reasonably well written.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
b (MoS for lead, layout, word choice, fiction, and lists):
- Using too many quotations is incompatible with the encyclopedic writing style, and they currently dominate large sections of the article. Please see WP:OVERQUOTING. Resolve by removing quotes, shortening quotes to only the most applicable and pertinent parts, or by paraphrasing quote where possible.
- a (prose, spelling, and grammar):
- I never noticed it before but you're right, there are currently way too many full quotes. I've started working on revising. Trillfendi (talk) 20:11, 10 January 2022 (UTC)
- It is factually accurate and verifiable.
- a (reference section):
b (citations to reliable sources):
c (OR):
d (copyvio and plagiarism):
- Fails copyright check for use of quotes that are too long, per WP:COPYQUOTE. Extensive quotation of copyrighted text is prohibited. The following quotes specifically are problematic:
- a (reference section):
- Stephen Farber of The Hollywood Reporter
- Villeneuve
- Lewis Knight of Daily Mirror
- Please resolve by removing, shortening, or paraphrasing.
- It is broad in its coverage.
- a (major aspects):
b (focused):
- Needs a Personal life section detailing relationships, charity, and possibly hobbies.
- a (major aspects):
- I think there used to be a personal life section but a couple of years ago people kept abusing it. I will write a new one. Trillfendi (talk) 19:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- It follows the neutral point of view policy.
- Fair representation without bias:
- Fair representation without bias:
- It is stable.
- No edit wars, etc.:
- No edit wars, etc.:
- It is illustrated by images and other media, where possible and appropriate.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
b (appropriate use with suitable captions):
- Good use of available images.
- a (images are tagged and non-free content have fair use rationales):
- Overall:
- Pass/Fail:
✓ Pass
- Article has been fixed to address any issues.
- Pass/Fail:
Comments
[edit]- Unsourced: "
On his mother's side, he is a nephew of husband-and-wife filmmakers and producers Amy Lippman and Rodman Flender.
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Done the most available source I could find was Us Weekly. Trillfendi (talk) 19:33, 11 January 2022 (UTC)
- @FormalDude: I added back a personal life section and fixed the quote/copyvio situations. Anything else? Trillfendi (talk) 22:07, 13 January 2022 (UTC)
- That's all, good job! ––FormalDude talk 22:12, 13 January 2022 (UTC)