Talk:Tiësto/GA2
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GA On Hold
[edit]After reviewing the article, I believe the article makes the GA requirements for the most part. However, there are some minor issues, and instead of failing the article, I am instead going to put the article on hold for a week to allow for the issues to be corrected. If/when the issues are corrected, feel free to contact me on my talk page, and I'll take another look, and if I see all of my concerns have been corrected, I will pass the article.
Here's a checklist of issues I would like to see resolved before I pass the article:
- Source 11, the MySpace reference, is not a reliable source. Remove it immediately and replace the citation with a reliable source.
- Take out the external link for The Spock from the text. If you really want the link to the site to stay, then please put it in the External links section.
- Fix the references which are marked as external numbered links in the references section. Once again, a reference template can fix that.
- I think the Main article link to Tiesto's Club Life might be in the wrong spot, so you might want to look into that.
- I want to see author, publisher, accessdate, and other info on every source other than just a title or url. It really helps with referencing. While it's not necessary to use a reference template, I highly recommend that you use the {{cite web}} template to better cite all of this information. For more information, you might want to take a look at WP:CITET.
- Some paragraphs are very light on sourcing. I would like to see those paragraphs better sourced. You can always reuse your references for this.
- Take another look over all of the references and make sure they are reliable and that they all have copyright information on the page.
Also, just take another look over the article and make any other changes you feel are possible. Thanks. Red Phoenix (Talk) 22:26, 15 April 2008 (UTC)
- Much better, guys, I am now going to pass the article. Red Phoenix flame of life...protector of all... 18:47, 20 April 2008 (UTC)