Talk:The Wilbraham/GA1

GA Review

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Nominator: Epicgenius (talk · contribs) 00:31, 22 October 2023 (UTC)

@Epicgenius Here are my comments! Hope they can be addressed. Arconning (talk) 06:30, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Reviewer: Arconning (talk · contribs) 16:48, 30 May 2024 (UTC)

• I will be reviewing this article, comments will probably be finished in the next 72 hours! Arconning (talk · contribs)

Prose and MoS

• Is the The in mentions of the name of the building part of the official name? Tried comparing with The New York Times and it always capitalized the "the" but in this article it doesn't. Would like a reason! :)
  • The most common name is "the Wilbraham", usually with the definite article before "Wilbraham". I don't know if "the" is capitalized as part of the official name, but MOS:THECAPS recommends lowercasing "the" in the middle of a sentence (except for titles and edge cases like The Hague), so that's what I did. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Lead

• New York City designated landmark, add hyphen between City and designated.
  • I've reworded the sentence to avoid this issue. (Personally, I think the hyphen might not be needed here. Technically it's the government, not the city, that designated the building as a landmark, and so "New York City" isn't being used as an adjective phrase; in other words, it's a designated landmark in NYC.) Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• and eastern end of the facade., pluralize end.
  • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• seventh story is clad in ashlar, add comma at the end.
  • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• with bathroom but no kitchen;, a bathroom.
  • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• china and glass Davis Collamore & Co., add importer before Davis.
  • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• John J, Gibbons, change comma to a period/full stop per citation 51.
  • Done. (Looks like I accidentally used a comma instead of a period - oops.) Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Site

• No issues.

Architecture

• No issues.

History

• leased out to residents for year at a time., for a year at a time.
  • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• his wife Emily H. Moir., add comma after wife.
  • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• That June, Moir applied, specify which Moir, might get confused lol
  • Done. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• The china and glass purveyors Davis Collamore & Co. leased the basement, ground-floor storefront, and second story when the Wilbraham opened., add commas after purveyors and Co..
  • I've reworded the sentence to avoid this issue. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)
• John J, Gibbons, change comma to a period/full stop per citation 51.
  • I've reworded the sentence to avoid this issue. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Critical reception

• Wikilink The Times.
  • I've changed this to "The New York Times" and linked it. Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

Images

• Images are appropriate and have the proper licenses.

Refs

• References all seem reliable and are properly formatted.

Spotchecks

• Earwig detector has no issues, just picked up some quotes. Pass.
• Manual check done, no issues.

Misc.

• Article has no ongoing edit war, broad coverage and information about the subject of the article, focused, and neutral about the topic (not really sure how would you be biased to a building, but the article shows no sign of that).
  • Thanks for the review Arconning, I appreciate it. I've addressed all the issues you raised above. (Funnily, it is sometimes possible for architectural fans to be biased in favor or against a building, but I digress.) Epicgenius (talk) 17:00, 2 June 2024 (UTC)

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Criteria: 1a. prose () 1b. MoS () 2a. ref layout () 2b. cites WP:RS () 2c. no WP:OR () 2d. no WP:CV () 3a. broadness () 3b. focus () 4. neutral () 5. stable () 6a. free or tagged images () 6b. pics relevant () Note: this represents where the article stands relative to the Good Article criteria. Criteria marked are unassessed

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