Talk:The Super Mario Bros. Movie/GA1
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Nominator: Yovt (talk · contribs) 21:47, 19 November 2024 (UTC)
Reviewer: Ali Beary (talk · contribs) 16:53, 21 November 2024 (UTC)
More to Plot
[edit]I believe that there is a lot of information in the article. From what I can see, it doesn't qualify for an immediate failure, which is good. However, maybe there could just be a bit more added to the plot section? Thank you!
Hello Ali Beary, thank you for reviewing this nomination. Please use this Manual of Style guideline in assessing this article.
With regards to the plot section, it is the appropriate length (which is between 400-700 words) and seems to be a summary of the most important events. Anything else? — 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 17:17, 21 November 2024 (UTC)
- @Ali Beary reminder ping. 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 22:47, 28 November 2024 (UTC)
- Drive by comment to point out that this is not, under any circumstances, a valid GAN review, and it seems the "reviewer" is just completely ignoring this review now. It's been two weeks now since Yovt tried to contact Ali about their review, while they continue to edit elsewhere. I encourage another editor to possibly take over this review if they come across this. λ NegativeMP1 04:36, 6 December 2024 (UTC) -- 𝚈𝚘𝚟𝚝 (𝚝𝚊𝚕𝚔𝚟𝚝) 21:19, 6 December 2024 (UTC)